Saturday, October 6, 2012

Consecutive sentences of neither here nor there

Consecutive sentences of neither here nor there

                      I

undecided funky-monkey
none- the -less for lack of direction
still
on                              In air
  The other        Up
                 Foot              
wishy- washy wands
                               Wave
more or less
                   Undeclared love.


                      II

when
custody of the hurdy-gurdy heart is let go
snowflakes great leaves in their pell-mell
dance to terra-ferma
touch together/time enough
for water to wet plant matters
touch down
ice victory undecided

1 comment:

  1. I enjoy the rhythms of this here nor there poem, it leaves an openness that breath moves through comfortably, capturing the lovely feel of snow falling. I'm reading this poem again now as snow falls in Ketchum. I'd say a good tag for this poem is 'relaxed.' :-)

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