Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Setting Fires

Setting Fires

burning poems
in
broad daylight

short skirt

matchstick grasses
set
to ignite

grasshoppers, songbirds, honey bees
play their sounds
in the westerlies

burning poems
in
broad daylight

toy soldiers
fire crackered
burnt

dirt spurts

poppies, weed seeds, sweet peas
in the westerlies

burning poems
in
broad daylight

worded paper

set alight

thrills, chills, hills
in the westerlies

blackened
before night

3 comments:

  1. I very much like the rhythm, rhyme and refrain here. Would like to hear this read outloud and/or set to music. (I know an accordion player I can recommend ;)

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    1. Yeah Daniel...I was hearing it too...Let's make it our next song...I will start tinkering.."Burning Poems in Daylight" hear it comes ... Quite a story behind this one- J

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    2. If you feel called, I'd enjoy hearing the intro story to this before you read this one, maybe in Portland (?), and I'd love to hear it with the naked voice and then also as a poem set to music or as a song...

      I love the cadence, as imagined, and the spaces between, the lightness that comes in the perceived gesture/act of burning poems.

      I love the 'short skirt' line and these:

      blackened
      before night

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