Tuesday, November 13, 2012

what's left - brainstorm


  • giraffes speaking, leading in long limbed grace
  • dance improv with left to my lou
  • what was once marked awkward now nimble

"what was once a burden
now a great delight"
  • world leaders using crayons and finger paints for law making
  • wars fought in the sand castle making competition, washed away by the sea
  • learning to play in peace
  • tolerating righties

2 comments:

  1. "Tolerating righties"...tee hee!

    "World leaders using crayons and finger paints for law making"...( Hopefully, also learning a thing or more about respectful interaction from Big Bird and Sesame Street!)

    woderful poem! thankx, Rachel

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  2. How did I miss this?
    I love these brainstorm bullets, especially yum over
    - dance improve with left to my lou
    and
    - what was once marked awkward now nimble--
    the heart of the ugly duckling feeling-thread of life summarized in a grateful/graceful way.
    Also: I'm very intrigued by the brainstorm idea of poeming. Prezi.com has potential for poetic presentation format...

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