Monday, March 11, 2013

Overheard Outside Burger King

Could you spare a quarter of your sterile life?
A grain of salt from your pillared wife?
Could I work for one smile of your arctic face?
Or a whiff of warmth from some mythic grace?
Anything'd help: a hat of yam,
a loaf of luck, a shoe of jam,
your skull encased in a wooden cask.
Please help. God bless. I'm shrinking fast.
Clog off, odd wad. Go melt in hell.
I'm busy in my diving bell.

5 comments:

  1. Thanks for the emotional poem. It will surely encourage many men to transform the lives of infertile couples through sperm donation.

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    1. Thanks for the
      e m o t i o n a l
      poem

      it will surely encourage
      many men
      to transform the lives
      of infertile couples

      through sperm
      donation

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  2. the above is spam, of course, but I think it makes an interesting poem or dialogue itself about how communication happens in the Internet age.

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    1. That comment by Maria Townsel isn't spam. It actually calls attention to my original title ("Overheard Outside a Sperm Bank"). The reader apparently interpreted the poem as a negative commentary on sperm banks, which astonished me. I intended it as a reflection on homelessness and solicitation and the grim tension that often sets up between people. If the title throws readers off, then perhaps it should change. I chose "sperm bank" arbitrarily; it could just as easily have been Burger King.

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