Monday, December 10, 2012

like sticks


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  1. If I free associate with this...i see
    Whol e (Holy ) live scenarios
    as a puppet's raised arms drop out from above it's head....revealing it's true inanimate nature...it's pull to collapse prone.
    the axis of gravity crisscrossing vertically/ horizontally/diagonally
    the x state of sleep
    when sunlight hits the collapsed form..it awakens again /recalling the day

    thanks for this Daniel!
    best,
    Rachel

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  2. Yes, yes! Thank you for your engaged witnessing, Rachel :D
    I am loving how we are all here at IMUNURI influencing each other toward/into/around the visual aspect of poems. I am going there very strongly lately and realize the direction is tribute to Janice, Scooter, J and you.

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