Friday, January 21, 2011

This Week's Prompt: Deep Breathe

My friend Noël coaches me to write in shorter sentences, that to read the writing of run-ons is like listening to someone speaking who forgets to breathe. It is exhausting. Only unlike conversation, we don't know they've stopped listening to us. They just close the book or click on a different link.

Let's use this week of Sun moving into Aquarius to breathe in the water-bearing circulation of the air realms.

Artwork by Melanie Weidner - Listen for Joy
Write    about    or    write    as    if    

                 spaciousness    and     breath     

         filled   the    lung  


    of    your    voice    

         and    

            the    breath   of    your 

                       pen    -    How   can   

                           your    writing   


                               billow    

              and      breathe     deeply? 


                                        Tags:      poem,    breathe

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