tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6223116282038145469.post7589906205109805760..comments2023-05-07T05:57:16.151-07:00Comments on IMUNURI: Ostensibly Soimunurihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04138257950952544921noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6223116282038145469.post-73238887219317709582012-12-22T11:15:46.104-08:002012-12-22T11:15:46.104-08:00Hey Daniel,
I'm so glad/touched/opened that y...Hey Daniel, <br />I'm so glad/touched/opened that you are excited by this poem. I love the inclusion both/plus/including inviting three (Ah, The Circle of Three shows up again!) instead/additionally/alternatively to naming only/singly/all of two. Something that has stayed with me when I first read about it is that the original language/tongue/speak of Christ had three different meanings, every word! So the folly/play/orneriness of single/imperative/authoritative translations of Christ's teachings. Here is a reiteration from the introduction that I read in Neil Douglas-Klotz's book on the The Lord's Prayer: http://www.selfknowledge.org/resources/bookreviews/prayersofthecosmos.htmJanice Sandeenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17896499919402267005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6223116282038145469.post-48020331352453072942012-12-21T16:00:10.311-08:002012-12-21T16:00:10.311-08:00Yes, yes! No, no!
My thinking/your thinking also/n...Yes, yes! No, no!<br />My thinking/your thinking also/not at all!<br />I find a new meaning of the punctuation "/" in this: not a dividing or "slash" but a combining, not option but inclusion, not "and/or" but "both/plus/including converse/obverse/reverse"<br />I am excited by this poem.Daniel Arihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10739828417831492075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6223116282038145469.post-60521710080353447662012-12-21T05:32:59.666-08:002012-12-21T05:32:59.666-08:00Thanks Janice, there is no better time of year tha...Thanks Janice, there is no better time of year than now for still to be a verb: <br />"R we/U dancing/stilling<br />With/against while speaking/<br />Refraining from speaking"Scooter Cascadiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12554870801786274284noreply@blogger.com