tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6223116282038145469.post305092242142454144..comments2023-05-07T05:57:16.151-07:00Comments on IMUNURI: Winter stories about my motherimunurihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04138257950952544921noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6223116282038145469.post-18548532030372892322013-06-03T12:06:38.121-07:002013-06-03T12:06:38.121-07:00Thanks for the reflections and feedback, Daniel:) ...Thanks for the reflections and feedback, Daniel:) ! ....it's fun to get the mirroring.<br /><br />Yes...i did go on and on... there was speed and a feeling of anxiety as i wrote...there was that need to fill and fill and fully describe....kind of like the Persian carpet-like densely repetitive, patterned weave of the character that i was storying about ( my nutty, Jewish Moroccan mama ):):):)<br /><br />Blessings!<br /><br />RachelAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07806942772766862768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6223116282038145469.post-55194097581403629602013-06-02T09:47:44.208-07:002013-06-02T09:47:44.208-07:00I really really like this. It hooks me, keeps me t...I really really like this. It hooks me, keeps me there throughout, curious and compelled. It has the juiciness for me of live storytelling performance, the dynamic of font and style like the flux of a spoken voice in front of an audience. Sometimes in poetry, I mind an overuse of words and feel wrong when an economy of syllables isn't observed--but not here. I love the size and pour of this poem, its ampleness and its willingness to express and express. All to say, wow!Daniel Arihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10739828417831492075noreply@blogger.com